stories

I love showing off my students work!

Here are a couple stories (I've corrected spelling but left everything else the same)

1.
Once upon a time their was two men. One men name Zoe another men name is Tomas. Two men kind. Tomas is rich and Zoe is very kind. One day Zoe and Tomas went to mart. Tomas buy anythings and Zoe don't buy Tomas buy Zoe anythings buy. Zoe said "Thanks Tomas." Tomas said "Ok. Thank you." Tomas and Zoe ver very good friends.
-End-

2.
Once day upon a time a two bird. One bird name is a Pen and Tape. The two bird like the honey so two bird a hard a get a honey so two bird a eat the honey so more happy.

3.
Once upon a time.
The pretty girl live in a small village.
Girl is very pretty.
but girl is very poor.
So small village's people are help the girl.
So the girl lives better lives.
-make story is end-

Sure, maybe they aren't the best stories in the world, but considering they're written by ten year olds in a second language...I'm impressed. I especially love 'make story is end'. :)